Friday, October 29, 2004

Clear times on the editing scene

A sentence from an otherwise admirably clear and straightforward marketing document:
This helps reduce the risk of a successful and profitable project for all our clients.
Gee, I'd hate our clients to run the risk of having successful projects. Actually, that's the best one of those since Moses Hadas wrote of a book he didn't care for that it filled a much-needed gap in the literature.

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